MasonicDisplay's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[The Dropped Ocarina]

Not bad. I can definitely see the OneyG in it.

[LUCKY DAY FOREVER]

This was so amazing. That ending was so sad, but in a way that makes the story great.

[Zarkon's Rules]

You should work on your timing. There needs to be space between when characters talk, so that it feels more natural. The way it is now is just too fast.

dndrequiem responds:

Thank you.

[Swelter]

Very very very awesome. This is the best short I've seen in a long time. You should be very proud of this.

[Pokemon in My Eyes]

It could use more animation. At this stage it's just static images with voices not synced to mouths. With some more work put into it, it could be great.

["The Worst"]

What the fuck did I just see? Whatever it was was really well done.

[Superman vs Goku]

Brilliant. I lovedthe ending, "Planet Paper" is pretty damn accurate to hoe Earth is to both of these guys.

[run cycle]

This is great. Very dynamic. My only critique would be that the hammer's handle seems a bit jittery and jumpy.

pencilfreak responds:

Thanks i wasnt to sure if it was but now i no it is lol ill change that up

[Opium Cop]

This had me laughing hard for almost the entire time. Especially the groaning part. Oh god.