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Not bad. I can definitely see the OneyG in it.

This was so amazing. That ending was so sad, but in a way that makes the story great.

You should work on your timing. There needs to be space between when characters talk, so that it feels more natural. The way it is now is just too fast.

dndrequiem responds:

Thank you.

I would suggest working on your anatomy and body proportions. I'm sorry, but this just is not very good.

Rojay101 responds:

i did not failed, that is how i want it and i want my drawing to be distinct by ignoring the principles that govern art plus i did that in less than a minute. Not to mention drawing with the mouse was hell... and lastly i am the only one doing this, the place i am from has no fancy drawing tablet, studio for art nor do i have a cast i only have me.

Very very very awesome. This is the best short I've seen in a long time. You should be very proud of this.

It could use more animation. At this stage it's just static images with voices not synced to mouths. With some more work put into it, it could be great.

What the fuck did I just see? Whatever it was was really well done.

Brilliant. I lovedthe ending, "Planet Paper" is pretty damn accurate to hoe Earth is to both of these guys.

This is great. Very dynamic. My only critique would be that the hammer's handle seems a bit jittery and jumpy.

pencilfreak responds:

Thanks i wasnt to sure if it was but now i no it is lol ill change that up

This had me laughing hard for almost the entire time. Especially the groaning part. Oh god.

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